DUALITY (5 Haikus)

1
Opt not for a fling
My head often gets this itch
Life’s a boomerang

2
Sneak in solitude
Trouble’s uninvited, I’m
Often audacious

3
The bridges we built
Shrink distances between us
Let us burn them down

4
Parallel we walk
Perpendicular we get
Stop on a dot, we.

5
Breaths I need to breathe
Breathing is so hard to keep
When her breath’s around

Written for Haiku prompt “Duality”

Brooke Shaden
Brooke Shaden
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  1. Oh these are both clever and deep nicely done!

  2. Nice job. I got major respect for writers capable of writing haikus. They seem like the most entertaining form of poetry to write. Unfortunately, I have never been able to master the process.

  3. wow, very good! I talk too much to create Haikus… lol

  4. So brilliantly and smartly put! All the five are equally amazing but my heart lingered over a bit longer @5.

  5. All of them are amazing but my personal favourites are #3 and #4! Well done!

    -Naima

  6. I should like to uplift these for possible use in a future issue of ‘the zen space’.

    Please email me at thezenspace{a}googlemail.com

    M

  7. Excellent take on this prompt…I enjoyed the entire series. Well done!

  8. Wonderful series .. I really enjoyed it very much. Bravo!

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