Volunteered Silence

Volunteered Silence
Prick disincarnated souls
One can’t help bleeding.

Photo Credit: Daunhaus at Deviant Art
Photo Credit: Daunhaus at Deviant Art

Written for Haiku/Tanka Challenge #1 at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie

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  1. You’ve done a magnificent job =) Both with the form and with the emotional depth you have managed to covey so concisely

  2. this is interesting – your timing is fortuitous. my days have been like this – replete with silence and blood. only difference is the voluntary – i am tired of having no one to speak with – or, let me rephrase that – be with.

  3. Amazing…. Just…. Amazing!

  4. I love this, it might be your first shot at haikus, but it reaches me and it’s great.

  5. How can one not bleed… indeed!? Interesting thoughts. Well-penned. 🙂
    -HA

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