Head in the Clouds

“When she cried it felt
as if the moon melted in her eyes
and I helplessly watched it
dripping and decorating the red carpet”
He wrote.

Wow, beautiful!  What an imagination!
They applauded without hesitation
It was all going well
Until
He got his head stuck in the clouds
He was a good artist
with bright future in every prospect
But
He could never mention
How he made her smile again?
because he never could.
She wanted his feet on the ground.

Photo Credit: dreambigdaily.com
Photo Credit: dreambigdaily.com

19 Comments Add yours

  1. abichica says:

    wow. This is just stunning. 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Appreciate it, Thank you!
      How are you by the way, long time no see? 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thanks Ami. Your display pic looks fab.

  2. words4jp says:

    this is totally cool – the photo is awesome and your written words are a perfect match. very cool:)

  3. Excellent. You are so talented, my friend. I love reading your imaginative mind …
    XO
    (Your Blog Space looks great, btw … ) 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Yay! Thank you so much dear friend!

  4. Oloriel says:

    Such an impacting piece and the photo compliments and goes along so well.

  5. beautiful! What an imagination! 🙂

  6. Chatty Owl says:

    Yes. Hundred times yes.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Yes to what? 🙂

  7. Wow i love this so much! I think this is my favourite thing i’ve read on wordpress so far! I also want to say how much i love your design and cover photo!

    1. Neeraj says:

      I really appreciate to what you said. WordPress is a gold mine, you’ll find so many precious things here.
      Thank you for the compliment, it made my day.

  8. Noora says:

    Brilliant poem, Neeraj!

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