She was right

She left saying
“I’ll never come in your dreams ever again”
and I was so mesmerized
watching her lips
that I couldn’t even know
that her eyes were wet.
I was thinking,
How every time her lips turn red
when I kiss them
in my dreams?
I knew
that was the last time
for me seeing her live.
Though I was feeling like a wet cloth
Hung on a wire,
bare in front of
merciless sun of summer
Yet mocking on her words
Uttering – “This is MY choice to dream you”
“You’ll be there.. I know!!!”
Then she appeared again
in my dream that night for the last time
but she didn’t let me kiss her
I don’t know why.
Now I realized
That everyday I needed to see her lips
to let my mind
process her images with my intentions
to produce a dream for me.

She was right once again.


19 Comments Add yours

  1. kalabalu says:

    you never listen to what she says
    even in dream you want to have your way
    that is..she left for good
    dreams are it would
    no more can you see her again
    live alone..sleep with pain

    1. Neeraj says:

      Curse me like I curse myself 😦

    2. kalabalu says:

      it is okay..just a poetry nothing more
      I didn’t curse..I am really sure
      just wrote lines for the woman in your life
      she of course is out of sight 😉

    3. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. was just kiddin’… its a fiction anyway 😉

  2. Chatty Owl says:

    How dreamy! Oh, I’m so impressed with this!!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you darling.. It seems we both are hanging in similar topics.

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      So it seems… A similar mind set as of lately i guess 🙂

    3. Neeraj says:

      Pleasantly surprising.. but you’re always the best in expressions. Btw did you listen the audio of this poem I included afterwards?

  3. Eve Lee says:

    The awakening of a dreamer
    Lovely written Neeraj
    I love it!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thanks Eve.. that’s a really nice name 🙂

    2. Eve Lee says:

      Thank you too….. *wink*

  4. Noora says:

    How absolutely captivating poem, Neeraj! 5 stars!!!!! Have a great weekend.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you so much Dear once again!

  5. stevenlomax says:

    Great poetry- I enjoyed it- did u include certain terms on purpose? Plus join in my weekly challenge number 1

    1. NEKNEERAJ says:

      Thank you. Which terms you are referring to?

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