Eyes getting dim
heart’s reaching ground
Central disturbance
causing soul’s early snowstorm
Legs are shaking
Head’s leaning down
Sulk in abundance
making solitude a paramount
Getting trapped with open eyes
Inside this thing –
Often called “a life”
When I don’t want anyone around
Psst in my ears
Make that sound
I’m tired of walking alive
Such a boring routine
is this everyday life
Pinch me hard
Make me scream
Wake me up
from this side
to inside a dream.
Amazing. Thank you.
Thank you for reading Ann.
I find this to be quite relatable – i like it:)
Thank you Kim.
Sorry, I’m still struggling to find anything for our collaboration. 😦
hey – wonderful things are worth waiting for – no hurry:) xx
Psssst
I like that whispering sound in my ear. Makes my skin shiver.
and I like shivering skin 😉
I know you do 🙂
Good that you know 🙂
Your weekend is going well?
Its usual.. yeah good I guess 🙂
How about yours?
So so as always 🙂
Routine is good at times.
Thats very true. But when the routine is broken, everything seems like a bigger mess than it really is.
I wish it does not happen with you. Out from routine you should land on the land of dreams 🙂
I wish that too :):)
love the electrical static of this poem…the subliminal shocks that comes with it.Makes me feel something which I find it hard to explain…Beautifully written.Love your style…
Really appreciate it. Thank you!
Wonderful piece
Thanks dear!
Wonderfull. My favourite part :”Getting trapped with open eyes
Inside this thing –
Often called “a life””
Thank you Oloriel!
This is amazing!
Psst…. Wake up
Follow me into the clouds
Where my body yearns for you
And my whispers grow loud
Psst… I’m calling you
Stealing your attention
From that boring routine
Forcing your insides to come alive
To a thrill that’s never-ending
Psst…. Come to me.
Sorry I couldn’t help it. =-D
Very Very Nice Neeraj. =-)
Jeez!! What’s your address? Lol 😉
6969 Cloud 9 ave
Somewhere in, Texas
;-D
Somewhere in Texas or $exas? You misspelled it deliberately? Lol..
Anyways.. Hugs and kisses are on your way 🙂 XOXO
Yes! I knew good would cum from that poem…:-)
Lol.. Thank you for believing in me 🙂