Bite me with your bitterness
Stab your teeth, kill my hope
Peep inside my eyeballs
Watch broken pieces forming kaleidoscope.
Sing me the haunting tunes
Pull my spirit; you’ve got your prey
Cut me wide open
Watch my pieces dancing in sway.
I’m trapped in your noose
Slit me, Slice me, I demand no delay
How beautiful love use to be
I’m sure you’ll know it today.

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12 Comments Add yours

  1. kalabalu says:

    Picture is colorful 😉

    1. Neeraj says:

      Sure it is! 🙂

  2. words4jp says:

    very haunting – in a beautiful way. the picture is stunning.

  3. “Slit me ,Slice me I demand no delay”… Reminds me of Kerouac.
    Also there is no way I was not going to read this with that beautiful image .

    1. Neeraj says:

      Wow! What a compliment!! Thank you very much for reading and leaving your response.

  4. Noora says:

    Wow. A haunting poem indeed – love this!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you so much dear friend for reading and leaving positive responses.

  5. Chatty Owl says:

    To be caught in a net of these emotions is something very very powerful…

    1. Neeraj says:

      Indeed it is! 🙂

  6. Oh wow …
    So good!!

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