Crazy Dude

Stupid looking dude
with a hole in his head
full of crazy stuffing
drives you insane, this lazy lad
Sweet and spicy
Whatever you may ask
brings water into mouth and eyes
always a pleasant surprise.

Pani-Puri-600

24 Comments Add yours

  1. Pua Nani says:

    that picture is very appetizing; I like the metaphor

  2. Roshni says:

    I loved it…the picture and the words! And, I’m craving for pani puri now! 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Run, run, run!!.. Lol 😀

  3. White Pearl says:

    Lol wow ! At first I never had the idea you were talking about gol-gappas….My fav desi snack….Love this poetry !

    1. Neeraj says:

      You sweet little liar.. didn’t you see the picture? Lol 😉
      Thank you!! 😀

    2. White Pearl says:

      Saw it ! But your poem was so realistic , seems like you were not talking about Gol Gappas at all 😀

    3. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. I know, was just kidding 😉
      Thank you anyways. 😀

    4. White Pearl says:

      Always a pleasure 🙂

  4. Shards Of DuBois says:

    lol

  5. words4jp says:

    cute! delicious looking!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Cute and delicious no doubt but such a mischievous fella.

  6. Oloriel says:

    This sounds delicious:)

  7. OMG .. looks delish!!
    What is this yummy dish?
    (I am a chef, you know .. worked running kitchens here for 16 years!)
    XOXO

    1. Neeraj says:

      If it’s treated as a dude it is called ‘Gol-gappa’ if a girl then ‘pani puri’ 😀

  8. Matrone Bell says:

    Your cooking these for me right 😉

    1. Neeraj says:

      I would if I knew how to 😉

    2. Matrone Bell says:

      🙂

  9. zainabattari says:

    Deliciously penned down 😀

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you 🙂
      Really appreciate your visit and that you liking so many of my poems. 😀

    2. zainabattari says:

      I like all of them! They flow so well 🙂 Most Welcome….

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