Frosted

Photo Credit: healzo.deviantart.com
Photo Credit: healzo.deviantart.com

Hoping to defrost the ice of her soul
He blew hot air in her mouth
ended up catching cold
…waiting to be defrosted.

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  1. wow – this is chilly:) i love the photo – and your words convey a brilliant message.

  2. Great image choice! The picture drew me in and and the words kept me captivated.

  3. Well done!! excellent poetry.

  4. Brilliant imagery in this one…poetry and photo!

    • Thank you Sharla, So good to see you back here 🙂

    • I have missed the visits. My husband is still confined to a critical care hospital so time has been somewhat limited. I do still try to keep my writing and blogs moving along. Hope to go back through and visit some of the postings I have missed. I do enjoy your poetry! Hope you are having a great weekend! 🙂

    • Oh! I understand how difficult it could be for you. I wish he recovers really quickly and gets back home the soonest. hope you are doing okay despite of all the hard work you’re putting in. I’m fine by the way. Thank you! 🙂

  5. Damn. This is good. Really good, darling.

  6. whao! Talk about making an impact, you did it in a total of four lines! 🙂

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