Frosted

Photo Credit: healzo.deviantart.com
Photo Credit: healzo.deviantart.com

Hoping to defrost the ice of her soul
He blew hot air in her mouth
ended up catching cold
…waiting to be defrosted.

17 Comments Add yours

  1. words4jp says:

    wow – this is chilly:) i love the photo – and your words convey a brilliant message.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Kimberly!

  2. justtalia says:

    Great image choice! The picture drew me in and and the words kept me captivated.

    1. Neeraj says:

      I appreciate your feedback 🙂

  3. Well done!! excellent poetry.

    1. Neeraj says:

      I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

  4. catnipoflife says:

    Brilliant imagery in this one…poetry and photo!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Sharla, So good to see you back here 🙂

    2. catnipoflife says:

      I have missed the visits. My husband is still confined to a critical care hospital so time has been somewhat limited. I do still try to keep my writing and blogs moving along. Hope to go back through and visit some of the postings I have missed. I do enjoy your poetry! Hope you are having a great weekend! 🙂

    3. Neeraj says:

      Oh! I understand how difficult it could be for you. I wish he recovers really quickly and gets back home the soonest. hope you are doing okay despite of all the hard work you’re putting in. I’m fine by the way. Thank you! 🙂

  5. Chatty Owl says:

    Damn. This is good. Really good, darling.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Was it really? 😛 Thank you anyways. 🙂

  6. Nadia says:

    whao! Talk about making an impact, you did it in a total of four lines! 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Nadia 🙂

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