Intuition

The anguish you’ve been carrying with you
is travelling across the mountains and the oceans
what you’ve been thinking about
what if I say, the clouds here are showering the same emotions

my sixth sense ain’t lie to me
somehow I smell the danger and the bad
but I’m just the man
who can not act without being dead sure instead

and how I wish to be around you
to see into your eyes
to try and find the reason
you’re hiding in disguise
because when I ask you
All you tell me is a lie

you think about me, my sleep interrupts
you start feeling bad I feel restless
what you’ve been worried about
what if I say, the morning breeze here blows the same distress

my heart shrinks in agony
when I feel you’re going away
but I’m still not sure
how to convey this message, what to say?

and how I wish to be around you
to see into your eyes
to try and find the reason
you’re hiding in disguise
because when I ask you
all you tell me is a lie

and I hate my intuitions
for giving me all these creepy vibes.

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Photo Credit: 74211.com

13 Comments Add yours

  1. CalmYourTits says:

    Simply beautiful.

  2. words4jp says:

    intuition can be a friend but an enemy. Mine is typically always spot on. this is a great piece – about what it can do…

    1. Neeraj says:

      We’re on same page then. 🙂

  3. Chatty Owl says:

    Intuition is such a powerful tool, when one discovers the proper use of it inside oneself. I absolutely love it, how your poems sound like music, like lyrics, like soothing lullaby, no matter, if they are sad or happy.
    Wonderful and I’m so lucky to be a part of WP to read this.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Darling! It’s my absolute pleasure that people like you are around to appreciate my pieces.
      Maybe soon you’ll hear these all poems blend in music in my voice 😉

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      Whoa! Make sure thats a promise 😛

    3. Neeraj says:

      A promise? That’s the plan 😀

    4. Neeraj says:

      🙂 sure 🙂
      How are you by the way?

    5. Chatty Owl says:

      Im ok, actually. Was wondering the same about you, but you never reply to your emails 😛

    6. Neeraj says:

      Really? Strange but I have not receive any of your emails 😦

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