Finger

I never told you this but

It always makes me wonder

How much power a finger can have

When it disappears

into the center

and tingles like hell

I’m not heavyweight

but I’m still heavier than your

little mighty finger

and still it drives me crazy

controls me as if I’m nothing but a puppet

causing me severe anxiety sometimes

and extreme pleasure of completeness

alongside

It makes me crawl on my knees towards you

begging to never let that finger

of yours take away from me

I always get confused

when I think

if you didn’t have that finger

would I still be loving you

the way I always do?

Is it you I love the most

or your finger?

27 Comments Add yours

  1. words4jp says:

    beautifully written – I like the metaphor – lots of different meanings.

    🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. Thank you Kim 😀

  2. Noora says:

    Wow! This is breathtaking.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

  3. Chatty Owl says:

    Oooo this is something slightly different from you, but i like it so much!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you! I tried to copy a little of your style. 🙂

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      Really? That’s why I liked it so much, haha. Flattered you would want to copy my style! That’s such a compliment. 🙂

    3. Neeraj says:

      Umm.. Now you’d tell me how much I succeeded? 😛

    4. Chatty Owl says:

      You did! Because I absolutely loved it! You know what they say, the student is always better than the teacher 🙂

    5. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. That’s a good one. 😀 Thank you!
      But its a long long journey to reach there where is you in this style. You’re always so amazing!!

    6. Chatty Owl says:

      You’re too kind! Thanks dear. How are things?

    7. Neeraj says:

      Things are little messy but great inspiration 😀
      How about you?

    8. Chatty Owl says:

      Not too bad, just have a writers block.

    9. Neeraj says:

      Hmm.. it happens with me in between every two pieces 😉

    10. Chatty Owl says:

      It happens way too often for me recently! I think I’m burned out with my poetry.

    11. Neeraj says:

      Nah! Dont worry there are times like that with everyone. Will you write with me again?

    12. Chatty Owl says:

      im sure one day i will!

  4. Yo Lonce says:

    Great 🙂

  5. Rhonda L. Brockmeyer says:

    A different style, but I actually like the subtle metaphors. Nicely done Neeraj.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you very much 🙂

  6. The ending to this is perfect. It really forces the mind to wonder. Oh the power of that finger. =-D

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol .. thank you, my experiment with style seems to be working fine so far 🙂

  7. Rekha says:

    Another beautiful piece, Neeraj! Loved it! 🙂
    Power of Finger! 😀

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. Thank you Rekha 🙂

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