Love, Cigarettes, Dandruff, Tar

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Photo Credit: hidlight.deviantart.com
Cigarettes are my companion, now
Sadly love is mere an opinion
When you, my muse
Sulked and slipped away

You said love was a disease, then
It remained no reason to please
And started falling off my heart
Like dandruff from head

I use all different memories, to
Wash away this dandruff entirely
Does it seem disappearing? No!
It glues like tar in lungs, then.

*Statutory Warning: Cigaretteย Smokingย is Injurious to Health.

13 Comments Add yours

  1. Oloriel says:

    Wow, this was very nicely composed, reading it gave a feeling of tasting a drink that is very similar to absinthe, but at same time completely different here in my country (it is very dark brown , very thick and very bitter.)

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Oloriel. I guess drinking absinthe would still be better than smoking cigarettes ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. culturemonk says:

    dude, very good ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Chatty Owl says:

    Tell your muse to come back.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. does it mean it wasn’t good enough? ๐Ÿ˜›

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      No, it means i want you to stop longing after your muse ๐Ÿ˜›

    3. Neeraj says:

      Haha! I only am trying to squeeze as much as I can outta it ๐Ÿ™‚

    4. Chatty Owl says:

      Squeeze tightly! ๐Ÿ˜›

    5. Neeraj says:

      ‘Rofl’ing ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. words4jp says:

    a beautiful piece – i read this yesterday, then got torn away from my pooter (it happens at ‘work’ ๐Ÿ™‚ i can see where the need to smoke can pop up – though i do not smoke. a substitution for pain or a distraction.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Most of the time its just a source of distraction this is what I feel. Anyways thank you for leaving your comment as always.

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