Slut

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Photo Credit: makaleci.com

He’s a porn star,

Dancing, stripping off everything,

Not clothes but emotions,

Shedding every layer off him,

His words lie naked on a piece of paper,

Stay there forever,

He exposes everything,

~

He’s a slut because –

Men don’t expose emotions,

But he does.

19 Comments Add yours

  1. tjtherien says:

    guess I’m a slut too…lol…interesting take…enjoyed…

    1. Neeraj says:

      Lol.. Thank you for reading 🙂

  2. Hira Nazir says:

    If deeply felt, it leaves you speechless with a certain prick. Really profound!

    1. Neeraj says:

      I’m glad you liked it! Thank you!

  3. Eva PoeteX. says:

    This is very unique! Love it! 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Eva!

  4. words4jp says:

    I agree, this is very unique – I really enjoy how you write about men and women from all angles. yesterday it was about a drama queen, to day about a male porn star. some of your pieces have been heartbreaking and some ooze romance. Your writing encompasses a complete spectrum of emotion and relationships. I am so impressed!

    1. Neeraj says:

      I’m so happy to know that you’ve been enjoying my writing. Its really an honor to receive such comments from you. Thank you!!

    2. words4jp says:

      you are welcome. i see myself as a reader when it comes to the blogging experience and as such, i believe as a reader we/i tend to migrate to the writers that we can relate to in some way – you are one of those writers for me:)

    3. Neeraj says:

      I agree! I’m honored that we connect 🙂

  5. abichica says:

    this is very interesting, and I believe if he is a slut because he exposes too much emotions then every woman wants a slut for a boyfriend. 🙂

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thanks Abi 🙂 I wish every girl gets a slut like him 😉

    2. abichica says:

      sounds great! 😀

  6. A delight to read my brother! A wonderful take on the word…God bless!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Wendell. Words from you are always pleasant 🙂

  7. soumyav says:

    you expressed with vigorous emotions here ! Thumbs up for the new style! loved it!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Soumya, an appreciation from you means a lot.

  8. globalunison says:

    I loved this one!! Totally one of the best of yours!!
    -Naima.

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