I see you at another corner,
With a man you’re not interested in,
When you chew your lips,
Looking at me,
I know what you want,
And that country mix,
In the background,
Making you so hot,
Tonight it’s you that I want,
~
I’m thinking of us together,
Entire night on each other,
Lying nude,
Does that make me rude?
Okay then call me baby,
Call me rude,
But it’s just that,
I don’t wanna waste our time,
Messing around,
~
And you want me to come over,
Ask your name,
Offer a drink,
You’re not that decent,
When I can see,
Inside you’re wearing pink,
Your assets are peeping outside,
I wonder why you hide,
Those beautiful things,
I won’t pretend that I’m not looking at you,
Only thing I’m thinking is,
To go down on you,
~
Thinking of us together,
Entire night on each other,
Lying nude,
Does that make me rude?
Okay then call me baby,
Call me rude,
But it’s just that,
I don’t wanna waste our time,
Messing around,
~
I can see you’re on fire,
The very same thing you too desire,
Let’s drive home if that’s fine,
There is my car, number 1069,
Let us get outta here,
Why wasting time,
Going round and round?
When we know every minute counts,
So, let’s be rude,
Let’s be rude tonight.
was this inspired by a country song? I must say it reminds me of quite a few – with a little ‘edge’:)
No! Not inspired by any song.. it’s struck somehow 🙂 Thank you!
I hope I did not disrespect your work in any way – I love country music, for the same reason why I love reading people’s work. Country songs seem to have a heart and an air of sincerity, along with a real sense of realism and empathy. In other words, I can relate. I can say the same about my fellow bloggers – your poems.
I do thank you for your written talent – and mean no disrespect,.
Lol.. It’s always the appreciation when someone gets the feeling of something fresh like country song through my writing.. I didn’t take your comment the other way. Instead it made me feel good. Let’s see if this could be converted in a song 🙂
humph – like a classic George Strait or a gritty Toby Keith or a sexy Gary Allan. We really cannot go more classic that George Strait – just because gritty and sexy would be too ‘G’ rated. 🙂
Oh yeah! They’re all legends.. I guess Gary Allan will definitely suit my taste 😉
yep, i agree and speaking from a chick’s point of view, he would be nice on the eyes – ya gotta think about the video. and yes, the voice has that certain something…….
Hmm.. that’s true.. Lemme think of the video then.. maybe I’ll post the script (for a video) for your approval soon 🙂
Sounds like a really cool idea. However, you do not need my approval
I have faith in you;)
Thank you for believing so.. btw I have written a couple of such scripts already 🙂
😉
Very nice Neeraj. I always love your poetry.
Thank you so much! That’s what keeps me going 🙂