Caravan of Dreams

Photo Credit: abhi373.blogspot.com
Photo Credit: abhi373.blogspot.com

Walking away,

Taking caravan of your dreams,

What am I leaving behind?

Have no idea, which way to go?

Damn! The night is dark again,

Chest is filled with pain,

Speechless are complaints,

Silence creeping in,

 …

Because of you,

Ever existed my everything,

Since you’ve gone,

Nothing remained,

Whom to share anxiety?

Whom to share the pain?

Walking away,

Taking caravan of your dreams,

Once again,

 …

Dreams that I ever saw,

Imprisoned are they all,

Ruined is our happy home,

Have no idea, which way to go?

 …

Damn! Conversation is incomplete,

Lightening is in breath,

Have met the silence again,

Loneliness is valiant,

 …

Because of you,

Ever existed my everything,

Since you’ve gone,

Nothing remained,

Whom to share anxiety?

Whom to share the pain?

Walking away,

Taking caravan of your dreams,

Once again…

____

Hindi Version

13 Comments Add yours

  1. warda Ch says:

    awesome… wonderfully depicted the pangs of separation….

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you so much!

  2. Chatty Owl says:

    It’s so… Emotionally mature. And sad. And hopeless. Beautifully written!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Chatty!

    2. Chatty Owl says:

      Always a pleasure!

  3. Wonderful expression of the pain of loss or breaking up. One who has been there feels these words. Love, sheri

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Sheri!

  4. So beautyful written and its not difficult to understand that feeling when you reading the text that you want to convey… 🙂

  5. Oh, the depth in this one.. the pain of being apart.. wow. So good!
    (Also, Your piece, ‘loving you’, I have used that image before on my blog! Nice.. Lovely!!) ~Jen

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Jen.. I’ll check out your blog too 🙂

  6. words4jp says:

    i can certainly relate to this one and “BOTTOM”. Thank you stopping by my blog – I am happy to have discovered your writing.

    1. Neeraj says:

      I am glad that you liked my work too 🙂

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