Watching you with him

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I see you holding his hands,

My heart beats as low as it can,

You look into his eyes,

I get the cramps,

To make it understand I try,

But it cries, it cries million tears,

 I see him holding you close,

My hands suddenly turn cold,

He tastes your lips,

Mine turns sour,

He squeezes you tight,

And it cries, it cries million tears,

I wish to dry out the oceans,

To shatter down the mighty mountains,

To tear apart every piece of me,

Burn them into ashes,

But here I lie watching you and him,

Through my own eyes,

He touches your hips,

In agony I bite my lips,

Around his neck are your hands,

My dreams break into the sand,

To make it ignored I try,

But it cries, it cries million tears,

I see a light in your eyes,

I feel I was living a lie,

Your head on his shoulder,

Mine aches in sadness,

He lifts you high,

And it cries, it cries million tears,

I wish to dry out the oceans,

To shatter down the mighty mountains,

To tear apart every piece of me,

Burn them into ashes,

But here I lie watching you and him,

Through my own eyes,

Believing that it’s not true,

It can’t be ‘coz I am living only for you…

14 Comments Add yours

  1. soumyav says:

    INtensity filled in each feeling that you emoted here!

  2. veehcirra says:

    I have missed your poems Neeraj…this is lovely!!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Veeh! I miss you too 😦

  3. abichica says:

    Ooh my gosh! wooww! this is so beautifully sad.. so much intensity, so much love yet filled with pure pain..

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you very much!

  4. ~Lady Day says:

    So heartbreakingly beautiful.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Lady 🙂

  5. Very accurate description. These words, they bite through your skin. Thank you for this poem.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you for liking it!

  6. veehcirra says:

    Reblogged this on VeehCirra and commented:
    Just had to share this poem, it’s oozing with such raw beautiful emotions. Another lovely poem by Neeraj a special friend to me. Enjoy it 😉

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Veeh for the reblog!

    2. veehcirra says:

      You are welcome Neeraj,your poems are oooh so beautiful.

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