I am Spiderman – The beginning

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A little boy named Chevy,

Last night saw his favorite movie,

He is an all time big sci-fi fan,

And the movie he saw was Spiderman,

He is smart, always gets good grades in school,

To him being a Spiderman is Oh-So-Cool,

He wakes up with the hangover,

Wanting to be real life Peter Parker,

Executes the plan in his school laboratory,

On a spider he caught from an old tree,

Puts the creature in a flask – conical shaped,

Switches on the machine to get it irradiated,

After 5 minutes or so, turns off the machine,

Grabs the spider in his hands being so mean,

Once bitten throws it on the floor where it lies,

It hurts so bad but there is spark in his eyes,

To get the mark hidden rolls down his sleeves,

Heads back home from the school he leaves,

After few days all criminals will feel pity,

As he’ll be the savior of New York City,

 … to be continued!

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24 Comments Add yours

  1. soumyav says:

    Oh HO! spider—man! love the action… 🙂

    1. Pieces says:

      Wait for the second part for real action .. hehe 🙂

    2. soumyav says:

      The action already began…the moment spiderman flashed in the scene..:-)

    3. Pieces says:

      Lol.. seems as you are a big fan too 🙂

    4. soumyav says:

      my son is..so I have to be a part to it.. 🙂

    5. Pieces says:

      Awww.. that’s so cute 🙂

    6. soumyav says:

      I think he has stepped out out of the frame of being cute now.. entered teens now..so new terms will be coming up now..

    7. Pieces says:

      That’s true.. however the title was for you 🙂

    8. soumyav says:

      🙂 🙂 then its all welcomed…somebdy calling me cute now… 🙂

  2. globalunison says:

    Is it going to be hilarious? Cause I found it a great piece but more of an action one or may be a cute poem! I think ya still need to drag the humor in, angry young man :p
    -Naima.

    1. Pieces says:

      Wait for the second part.. I bet to surprise you yet again.. Its going to take a sharp turn from cute to hilarious..

    2. globalunison says:

      Hahaha 😀
      Your surprises are good – I am waiting yet again 😉
      -Naima.

    3. Pieces says:

      And yours.. OMG. I was like it is really you? 🙂

    4. globalunison says:

      Oh yeah, it was really me! Don’t tell me I sound that pathetic. lol.
      -Naima.

    5. Pieces says:

      Not in negative sense. It always feels good to get such surprises.. I wish to get them more often 🙂

    6. globalunison says:

      Are you sure by the “SAME PERSON”? lol
      -Naima.

  3. danroberson says:

    Surprises and twists keep a story interesting. What is even more exciting is your delight in what is to come.

    1. Neeraj says:

      So true!! Oh, then I’ll have to come up with the sequel I guess. I haven’t got enough thoughts about it. 😦

  4. Thanks always for your visits…they are always a shining blessing!

    1. Neeraj says:

      You’re welcome Wendell!

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