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I see you,

Coming through the door,

Unintentionally my eyes get stuck on you,

I realize I have something inside my chest,

As it beats,

I know I am alive,

Who are you?

Why I cannot resist the urge?

Are my fantasies turning true?

I become crazy,

As my eyes meet yours,

Like a magnet, you drag me towards you,

Can I touch you?

Seems like it’s the only urge left in me,

I feel shiver in my spine,

As I watch your lips moving,

Have I really found love?

Or I’m dreaming?

27 Comments Add yours

  1. globalunison says:

    Goodness, this was tempting and over-whelming.

    Your presence may be a dream,
    But I hear someone scream.
    Is it you or my pulse swaying with the soft breeze,
    The distance or my insecurities pulling up as I try to seize.
    I give up in your arms and pray for the *happy end*,
    My soul longs for our union – one last blend with the trend

    Just same lame thoughts knocked me down as I read this.
    With love,

    1. Pieces says:

      I’ll never let you be insecure,
      I’ll always stick around for sure,
      Don’t worry there will never be an end,
      I’ll always keep you safe in my heart .. Oh dear friend!

    2. globalunison says:

      Hahahaha πŸ˜€
      That was the poetry response to your “POEM” dumbo!!!
      Anyway, so lovely it is πŸ™‚

    3. Pieces says:

      I knew what was it..
      but oh!
      Whichever way I go,
      I’ll always be called a Dumbo! πŸ™‚

    4. globalunison says:

      Hahaha πŸ˜€
      Cause you are my dear darling friend, aren’t you (dumbo)?? πŸ˜‰

    5. Pieces says:

      I don’t know.. you call me that 😦 you should know it better

    6. globalunison says:

      Awww.. I call it cause that’s how O call my friends!
      In noway do I mean to offend you, Neeraj!

    7. Pieces says:

      Just kidding sweetheart.. I know that πŸ™‚

    8. globalunison says:

      Awww.. you are way too adorable!!

    9. Pieces says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

    10. globalunison says:

      Always welcome! πŸ™‚

  2. Moinees says:

    Hoo! Wow. Loved this one. Make your dream a reality mister!!!

    1. Pieces says:

      Sure.. I’ll grab once it happens πŸ™‚

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you Soumya!

  3. gotcrissy says:

    Wow that was cool. Not only the poem but you and globalunison going back and forth like that with the continuation. Your blog is really funny and good.

    1. Pieces says:

      Hahaha .. Thank you πŸ™‚

  4. catnipoflife says:

    No! You are not dreaming. That is exactly how I felt when I saw my husband for the first time. . .I just knew it from that very firsst moment! Lovely:>)

    1. Pieces says:

      Wow.. that’s so wonderful..Seems like I know how does it feel being in love πŸ™‚

    2. catnipoflife says:

      Yes, Ma’am! We recently celebrated 28 years and still as much in love as the day we met!

    3. Pieces says:

      It should be Sir instead πŸ˜‰
      WOW.. I am so so happy for you πŸ™‚

    4. catnipoflife says:

      Oh, dear! What a faus paus! I guess I just became the empitome of assumption:>) Now I feel even stronger toward your writing!

    5. Pieces says:

      That’s okay.. there are always 50% chances of going wrong in such assumption πŸ™‚

  5. abichica says:

    woww!! love it!! πŸ™‚

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