All Alone

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She lays sleeping,

Dreaming of the time we had shared,

Recalling the words we always cared,

Living in the world where we were together,

She cries often,

Wishing if we could fall back again,

Denying to bear all the pain,

She has been keeping,

While she is dreaming,

I walk alone,

Thinking of the time has gone long,

Writing down the lyrics for my song,

All alone,

I cry often,

Whishing if I can roll back the time,

I see my watch and its half past nine,

Prime time,

I watch people,

Walking down the road talking out load,

They seem happy there is no doubt,

While I hold my sound,

We were happy,

Why didn’t we try to hold ourselves?

How did we let loose our own belts?

So easily,

We both are thinking,

By the flood of our hearts we are sinking,

She lays in her bed and I keep drinking,

Every night,

Wishing if only we didn’t have that fight,

We would have been together,

Everything would have been alright,

While she lays sleeping in a dark room,

I walk on the street under the moon,

Fighting our fights since so long,

All alone.


27 Comments Add yours

  1. rvcallope says:

    dear, if you really do love her. do back to her. fights are there but more of it, it is your love !!!

    1. Pieces says:

      Oh Dear! I really appreciate your comment.. I’m never gonna let her go.. that’s for sure.. I am lucky that this pieces is just an imagery.

    2. rvcallope says:

      hi dear, you really are happy and that makes me very very happy, you dont know how happy always. but for now would you mind if invite you to read my blog posts ??? looking forward for you. always. love rv.

    3. Pieces says:

      Sure I’ll be there soon πŸ™‚

    4. rvcallope says:

      would be looking forward for you. love rv.

  2. catnipoflife says:

    Whew! Glad to know it is only imagery. . .but WOW! what an image you portrayed!

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you Sharla πŸ™‚

  3. globalunison says:

    This is beautiful! It is so much like a *SONG*!

    1. Pieces says:

      That’s the intention πŸ™‚

    2. globalunison says:

      Then ya just did it!! Thumbs up man ! πŸ™‚

    3. Pieces says:

      would you mind tuning it? πŸ˜›

    4. globalunison says:

      Why do ya always catch my back eh??

    5. Pieces says:

      ‘coz you are ma friend .. aren’t you?

    6. globalunison says:

      Oh yeah, I am!! πŸ™‚

  4. soumyav says:

    on different paths we walk,
    gazing around the world as I walk,
    you cuddled in yourself,
    confused whether to break the norms!

    Loved the feeling of it.

    1. Pieces says:

      Awww.. I was missing that lyrical comment .. Thank you! πŸ™‚

  5. Prashant says:

    if one could so easily figure out that what lies in love – love would have lost most of her charm !
    You are doing absolutely fine bhai…just be the perfect lover you are

    1. Pieces says:

      How true is that! I promise I won’t change πŸ™‚

  6. ~Lady Day says:

    Goodness this is breath takingly sad Neeraj…just lovely. What a well done sad write…it definitely grabbed my heart.

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

  7. mehakzaidi says:

    you have an amazing style of writng poetry.I am greatly inspired.:)

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you for your beautiful comment, Mehak. You’ve got a really nice name πŸ™‚

  8. radhika says:

    Loved it…yu r sooo good at poetry… reminds me of myself

    1. nekneeraj says:

      Thank you Radhika.. I dont want anyone to be in such a situation though.

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