Nothing without you!

Photo Credit: wallppaer.com
Photo Credit: wallppaer.com

When everything seems difficult,
When every step makes me fumble,
And nobody seems to care,
When life does not offer any goal,
When earth seems to get into the black-hole,
And the world around seems to tremble,
You put me in your arms to hold me tight,
You whisper in my ears that everything will be alright,

And I wonder why you love me this much,
Why you believe in me,
I can never tell you how much you mean to me,
Without you I can not take a step ahead,
When you’re not around I feel so dead,
I feel so dead…

While I keep wandering around,
When I say you’re the one,
And my world rotates because of you,
When I don’t reach my ground,
While I feel warm in your arms,
And my fingers run through your hair,
You kiss my head to light up my eyes,
You whisper in my ears that everything will be alright,

And you are the one seems true to me,
You love me so much and I can’t believe,
I am the lucky one to have you in my arms,
Without you I can not take a step ahead,
When you’re not around I feel so dead,
I feel so dead…

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  1. Essence OK, very touching and, as already expressed somewhere above, “romantical” :). Rhythm could be improved upon, I dare say. Too much adherence to correct grammar like too many “to’s” for example, which severely disturbs the melody of your poem.

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