Nothing without you!

Photo Credit: wallppaer.com
Photo Credit: wallppaer.com

When everything seems difficult,
When every step makes me fumble,
And nobody seems to care,
When life does not offer any goal,
When earth seems to get into the black-hole,
And the world around seems to tremble,
You put me in your arms to hold me tight,
You whisper in my ears that everything will be alright,

And I wonder why you love me this much,
Why you believe in me,
I can never tell you how much you mean to me,
Without you I can not take a step ahead,
When you’re not around I feel so dead,
I feel so dead…

While I keep wandering around,
When I say you’re the one,
And my world rotates because of you,
When I don’t reach my ground,
While I feel warm in your arms,
And my fingers run through your hair,
You kiss my head to light up my eyes,
You whisper in my ears that everything will be alright,

And you are the one seems true to me,
You love me so much and I can’t believe,
I am the lucky one to have you in my arms,
Without you I can not take a step ahead,
When you’re not around I feel so dead,
I feel so dead…

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  1. LOVELY NEERAJ! THE FLOW IS VERY SUBTLE..

  2. (Sigh) oh sakes romantic. So lovely. I need a new word for your writing. Romantical. There. Made a new word just for you. Coming to dictionaries 2013. 🙂

  3. kya baat hai ! Learning guitar kya ?

  4. Ummm… This is beautiful. I liked it.
    With love,
    -Naima.

  5. A Masterpiece !
    Read and go deep into the world of catchy words !
    Just Amazing !

  6. Such a beautiful poem! There is some light shining a little brighter!

  7. Beautiful piece.. 🙂

  8. …………………*sobbing*………………… Jk.. but wow… touches the heart 😦

  9. I agree with the want and need of the poem. We need someone who can make us smile and feel safe. Thank you for the amazing poetry for love.

  10. Essence OK, very touching and, as already expressed somewhere above, “romantical” :). Rhythm could be improved upon, I dare say. Too much adherence to correct grammar like too many “to’s” for example, which severely disturbs the melody of your poem.

  11. The wonderous disbelief of love received. Such a lovely poem. 🙂

  12. A lovely piece – if only it were true for me.

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