Without you!

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Sun has fainted,

It has become dead cold,

Mornings have turned stale,

They aren’t fresh anymore,

Fragrance has not remained flowers’ ultimate part,

They have been bitten by their own thorns,


Birds crash every time they fly,

They don’t sing,

They wish to die,

Earth does not rotate,

It stands still,

Water does not satisfy the thirst,

It always tries to kill,


I get thuds inside my chest,

Heart does not want to live in me,

It’s drilling all the way through,

To come out and find you,


See what has happened without you,

Everything needs you now,

I don’t know how,

But you’ll have to come,

Please come somehow,

Whisper in my ears your magical “Hey

Get back everything you took away…

21 Comments Add yours

  1. ~Lady Day says:

    So gorgeously sad and haunting. How are you Neeraj? It does feel like the earth needs to stop rotating in those moments. Love this.

    1. Pieces says:

      I am doing well.. How are you? Thank you!

    2. ~Lady Day says:

      Today..my day started perfectly…I am as well as life gets.. 🙂

    3. Pieces says:

      That’s a wonderful news 🙂

    4. ~Lady Day says:

      xo hope life has been kind to you too friend.

    5. Pieces says:

      Yes so far 🙂

  2. globalunison says:

    A great one by our sad young angry man! You can display pain well – may be experiences always counts huh!

    1. Pieces says:

      Hmm.. Keep adding the adjectives, maybe it can complete ma life story some day 😛
      Thank you Naima!!

    2. globalunison says:

      Yeah, it certainly will after all who will be adding up huh 😉
      You are welcome.

    3. Pieces says:

      Happie wala Birthday, Sweets!! 🙂

    4. globalunison says:

      Thank you so much for the wishes. Humbled to have receive them from young angry sweet man! Good day!

    5. Pieces says:

      You’re welcome! 🙂

  3. Prashant says:

    anyone for more beer ?
    I’ve got the opener…plz get the bottles !! 🙂

    1. Pieces says:

      That’s not fair.. just the opener?.. Seems like you’ve already had your share?

  4. yazrooney says:

    This is so heart-stoppingly beautiful.

  5. susieslittleinspirations says:

    This piece is beautiful.xo

    1. Pieces says:

      Aww.. Thank you so much!! 🙂

    2. susieslittleinspirations says:

      pleasure and so true. x

  6. catnipoflife says:

    Really don’t think it could be better said than Lady Day – So gorgeously sad and haunting! Very poignant:>)

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