Unspoken

He runs towards her room,

To check if she is still there,

He is so restless,

He just had a nightmare,

She’s left for office already,

On the bed lies her darling teddy,

He smells around running here and there,

He does not know how he should care,

Soon he realizes he is alone in the house,

Of his sadness takes advantage a naughty mouse,

It starts showing all its terror,

When he poorly sits quietly in the corner,

It chews the carpet, eats the bread,

Today surely it does not feel any threat,

He doesn’t do anything lets it feel mighty,

How sad! He does not have anyone to share his anxiety,

He can’t do anything but wishes for her to come back,

Into his confidence he is having a huge lack,

He doesn’t eat anything, only waits at the door,

Until in the evening he hears her car’s roar,

He runs through the door, jumps the fences,

Seeing her smiling his heart dances,

He rides on her tries to hold her tight,

Can’t even say how badly he was missing her sight,

She doesn’t get to know what is so special there,

She’ll never understand how much does he care,

But he is happy to see her there,

Thankful of the God for listening his unspoken prayer.

28 Comments Add yours

  1. globalunison says:

    This is beautiful – simply amazing!!
    You can express the unexpressed feelings too – with an everlasting charm!!
    -Naima.

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you Naima.. Just the thoughts of wandering mind 🙂

    2. globalunison says:

      Wandering as well as thoughtful!!
      I loved the theme !!
      -Naima.

    3. Pieces says:

      Thank you.. btw did you get a chance to record till now?

    4. globalunison says:

      No darling, Ramadan is keeping me quite busy!! So, I apologize on my part!
      -Naima.

    5. Pieces says:

      Oh! How can I forget that?… Ramadan Mubarak !

    6. globalunison says:

      Thank you so much. Raksha Bandhan to you!
      How many Rakhis you got??
      -Naima.

    7. Pieces says:

      Thank you! I’ve got just one and I even do not need more 🙂

    8. globalunison says:

      Hahahaha 😀
      Really?? You don’t! I planned on giving you one!! 😉
      -Naima.

    9. Pieces says:

      Nahiiiiiiiiiii 😦

    10. globalunison says:

      Ummm.. Really??? No??
      Well, no issues! I think you are happy with one! 🙂

    11. Pieces says:

      Yes I’m happy.. thank you 🙂

    12. globalunison says:

      Hahahaha 😀
      You are adorable!
      -Naima.

    13. Pieces says:

      U think so? 😛

    14. globalunison says:

      Hahaha 😀
      Since a long time, dear! 😀

    15. Pieces says:

      Thank you for doing that 🙂

    16. globalunison says:

      You are always welcome!!
      -Naima.

  2. ~Lady Day says:

    Lovely work. Just lovely Neeraj. Hope you are well.

    1. ~Lady Day says:

      oh yes, and saw on the news today about the power outages there…hope that did not effect you, and if it did…hope you are well for sure friend. Hugs to you.

    2. Pieces says:

      Thank you! I’m all good despite of being affected by electricity outage.. Hope you are well too! xo

  3. Roshni says:

    If you hadn’t included the picture, I might probably have picturised a guy talking about his love. 🙂 Great lines, beautiful thoughts.

    1. Pieces says:

      Really?? 😛 Thank you! 🙂

  4. yazrooney says:

    What a lovely picture, and beautiful sentiments!

    1. Pieces says:

      So glad that you liked it .. thank you!

  5. teasbook says:

    What a lovely poem! 🙂 By the way, thanks for stopping by abstramification!

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you.. I’ll keep visiting for I liked your style 🙂

  6. words4jp says:

    Oh Neeraj – this is so adorable. and touches me right in the heart, especially since my Pee is having trouble adjusting to being at home during the day – she can no longer come to work (after 8 years) since the new owner bought the company.

    1. Neeraj says:

      Oh.. must be heartbreaking for her 😦

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