Loving you!

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Let me hold you one more time,
Let me say once again,
That I love you,
That my every breath is only for you,

Right from the day one,
You are the only one,
Living inside me,
I don’t want that day to come when,
If only…
…few hours are left for me,
No! It won’t be enough …
…to show my love…
…for you,

So I wanna tell you right here, right now, once again,
That you’re the only dream I dream,
That our love is the only thing… I’m gonna keep,
…before I leave,

I don’t wanna say “If only, I had a chance”
Or “Few more moments”
I don’t wanna let it hidden inside … till that time…
No! I won’t hide,
So I say …I love you… I really do,

I love you for being by my side,
To let me love you,
For giving me the right,
To love you,

Right from the day one,
You are the only one,
Living inside me,
I don’t want that day to come when,
If only…
…few hours are left for me,
No! It won’t be enough …
…to show my love…
…for you,

Let me, let me,
Love you every moment,
Let me tell you every second,
That I love you,
I really do,
I don’t know if tomorrow is the end,
Let me live every moment…
… With you,
Let me love you…
…every second…
… till the end…

24 Comments Add yours

  1. globalunison says:

    I wonder if I will ever be able to write with such a depth 🙂
    -Naima.

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      🙂 Watched “if Only” today and so here is the result 🙂

    2. globalunison says:

      Hahaha 😀 Damn! I better read you then watching that movie all over again!! 😉
      -Naima.

    3. Neeraj Kumar says:

      I highly recommend that.. I love to watch it again and again ..

  2. Dakshi says:

    Wonderful.. I know this exact feeling. Lovely to be in love, isn’t it?

  3. Cynthia Ann Katon-Alfonso says:

    Sweet and romantic, you must really be in love to write anything like this.

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      That’s true.. Thank you!

  4. Beautiful words expressed with great feeling. I look forward to more 🙂

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you so much! I Promise to not to disappoint 🙂

    2. I am also a writer and my 2nd book, Salsa! The Taste of life will be out very SOON! I love reading poetry and your poem was refreshing! 🙂

    3. Neeraj Kumar says:

      The title seems appealing.. What about the first one?

    4. My first book is the story of a girl who goes through tremendous adversity as a child. She ends up becoming a writer and wrote all about it. In case you were wondering, it’s based on my true to life experiences 🙂 here is a link with more info and thanks for the inquiry! http://evasantiago.wordpress.com/about/

  5. soumyav says:

    its so intense…and the new background header picture is gorgeous..

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you so much! 🙂

  6. ~Lady Day says:

    Ah. Is there anything sweeter than a man in love? Just lovely.

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      😀 .. Thank you! 🙂

  7. yazrooney says:

    This brought a tear to my eye. Very moving.

    1. Pieces says:

      Thank you! I’ll take that compliment 🙂

  8. Joan Miranda says:

    like it? no. I love it…:)
    its really wonderful…:)
    beautiful and pure and yet painful…
    moving on always is…:)
    You are an amazing writer, you just pull on to my heartstrings…:)
    Kudos, never stop writing…

    1. Pieces says:

      Awww! Thank you Joan so much! I am glad that I could go that 🙂 and yes I’m not going to stop writing 🙂

  9. Sophie Milan says:

    I read from one of your replies that If Only is quite your inspiration for this. Awww. That movie is really heart breaking and your poem, well, it speaks for the couple esp the guy I’d say. 😀

    1. Neeraj says:

      Isn’t it a pity that we tend to be so damn busy in our lives that we can’t even express our love to the loved ones? what’s the point of waiting for the right time when we know that our life can run short anytime? Thank you for appreciating my efforts!

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