Emptiness

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Where I am…?

Where I’ve been…?

I don’t know…

I can’t think…

 Was I here since always…?

Or I have just begun…?

Every moment I doubt…

…my own existence

I can see myself…

I can touch…

I get wet when it rains…

But I don’t feel anything…

Just the emptiness…

Is it a beginning or an end?

~

What I did…?

What I said…?

I don’t know…

I can’t think…

 Is this a reward…?

Or I committed a sin…?

Every moment I fight…

… My own resistance

I can see myself…

I can touch…

I get wet when it rains…

But I don’t feel anything…

Just the emptiness…

Is it a beginning or an end?

18 Comments Add yours

  1. globalunison says:

    Neeraj, you have written it with a great feel! I loved it to pieces!
    -Naima.

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you Naima.. but I still could not write the way I wanted to.. 😦

    2. globalunison says:

      May be because for today, the quota had been done! Wait for the next day and what it brings to you 🙂
      -Naima.

    3. globalunison says:

      Keep smiling, it suits you 🙂
      -Naima.

    4. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Sure I will .. thanks! 🙂

    5. globalunison says:

      My pleasure as always 🙂
      -Naima.

  2. soumyav says:

    beautful poem with beautiful background! ur page now shines brightly! 🙂

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you! There is a lot more to do with this page .. lets see if it works. 🙂

  3. Brad Stanton says:

    wonderful poem and photography

  4. A bit sad, but beautiful! The pictures is also great and represents the poem perfectly!!! Great choice

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you Patricia!

  5. Prashant says:

    beginning of the perfect writer !

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Oh my!.. Thank you Prashant!

  6. onlinefunland says:

    Reblogged this on onlinefunland.

  7. wow! yu can really do wonders! Loved every word! ❤

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you so much!

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