Sorry I can’t…

As you say your final goodbye,

You leave a hollow space in my chest,

From now onwards though I’ll live,

But my soul will never take a rest,

You left so many things cluttered,

It’ll take many years to adjust,

You didn’t have to insult my emotions,

By classifying them nothing but lust,

Sorry that I can not stop loving you,

That’s the only thing I do the best,

You started fighting unnecessarily,

Where there was nothing to argue,

Every time I tried to convince,

That every sensation was just so true,

Now you don’t even want to listen,

Anything I am ready to explain you,

Why don’t you have anything else?

Except the final adieu,

Sorry that I can not stop loving you,

That’s the only thing I do the best,

The only thing I do the best…

12 Comments Add yours

  1. soumyav says:

    sometimes a farewell does good,
    even if we dnt believe its true,
    the ache and the love will always stay,
    but the time will heal the pain away…
    mark my words,for Iam your friend,
    shall never ask you to go on a wrong trend,
    sorrow of yours I cannnot reduce,
    but can always try to be around you…
    sometimes it happens for the good,
    something new just to bloom,
    leaving the old path,
    catching the new,
    shall fill your life with a coloured view…

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you for your beautiful words!

  2. ~Lady Day says:

    Wow…Neeraj, this is haunting, sad, well written, who ever did this…it breaks my heart. Hugs to you dear one.

  3. Neeraj, you visit my site and read my words, and your hearts gesture always adds a beautiful radiance to my day! Your words are moving and precious…like beautiful diamonds being found! I wait for your joy to return along with the smile of your words, that enchanting mix of melody and love and its taste of the first day of spring. Rise up and again embrace your life, your breath and begin to share…there are many sisters and brothers who feel you but love you because you are so very special! Let us once again laugh and sing with you! Let us once again embrace you with love that will never leave you…let us help make you smile again…that beautiful smile, as you make me smile with your visits my sister! May you be blessed with a rebirth soon in your heart! Love always!

    1. Pieces says:

      Awww Wendell, you are such a sweetheart.. I really appreciate your appreciating my visits and words… I really love your visits too.. Yes, lets spread the smile all around…
      Just a small information about me I would like to share is by God’s grace I should be treated as Brother not sister 😉

  4. Sorry, my brother! thanks for the heads up!

  5. So cute and so sad. I like the rhyme scheme too

  6. Dakshi says:

    Melancholic. Breaks the heart. 😦

  7. Noora says:

    “Sorry that I can not stop loving you,
    That’s the only thing I do the best”
    … my fav lines.
    Powerful and honest poem.

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