Fortunate to be Misfortunate

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Walking through the rainy days,

Keeping up his courage,

Soaked in misfortunate water,

Rubbing on the anger mud,

Holding sand,

Seeking friends,

Keeping on the burning flame,

Seeing pals turning fake,

Every relation on a stake,

Shouting on,

Bursting out,

He won’t give up,

He won’t give out,

Perhaps growing rivals,

But necessary for the survival,

Keeping fingers up,

Pointing out the middle ones,

Right to their faces,

He sees them naked,

Under the misfortunate water,

Fortunate to be misfortunate,

For witnessing the unwitnessed,

Wants to rain it all,

No ways he’s gonna fall,

Choosing the rights,

Dropping the wrongs,

Progressively creeps,

Aggressively learns,

Yearns to make it right,

Till the end he’ll fight.

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16 Comments Add yours

  1. Homepage says:

    I really like your writing style, good information, appreciate it for posting : D. 255508

  2. This one and ‘Inhuman’ are my favorites. They are the best identification to every human being. Love your work.

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Thank you! Please don’t miss to vote your favorite ones 🙂

  3. Neeraj says:

    Reblogged this on Pieces.

  4. t h i n g s + f l e s h says:

    i find sustenance, warmth, and light in this eloquent poem. thank you for sharing it with me. tony

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Tony!

  5. words4jp says:

    This is wonderful. I see a lot of hope. xx

  6. I agree this speaks elegantly on the human condition and quite honestly I could use a little fight myself

    1. The moment we stop throwing up a fight for life.. we are dead already .. This is what I believe.

    2. Very true and something I need to hear on occasion

  7. A beautiful offering for this prompt…show true determination despite the obstacles. Very nice written.

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