Eternal Love

Eternal Love
Eternal Love

Saw,

Fell,

Smiled,

Touched,

Felt,

Flew,

Crashed,

Stumbled,

Fell,

Stood up,

Eternal love lost.

5 Comments Add yours

  1. soumyav says:

    what a co incidence ..we both wrote on same topics yet different aspects… 🙂

  2. soumyav says:

    one word coul dhave change dthe menaing and outlook of ur poem.the last line..
    stumbled,
    fell,
    stood up,
    love lost,
    eternal love gained…

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Really, it would have! 🙂

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