A Breed Extinct

Don’t judge my actions,

Volatile are these,

No prediction,

So much inside me,

Is always floating,

It’s random,

No pattern,

I change my course,

Before you distinguish,

It’s quick with conviction,

A breed extinct I am,

Exist only in assumptions,

Impossible is to deceive me,

I trust intuitions,

I read mind,

I gauge soul,

Seem so rigid,

Yet so humble,

What is inside you,

I always know,

I know the reason,

Why you tremble.

No matter which side you are,

No matter what your trait is,

I’ve got everything,

To make you fumble.

You’ve got to pursue,

My every sensation,

Abduct my instincts,

Make them poisoned,

If you succeed extensively,

Victory is achievable,

Yet you’ve got to be constant,

To be alert,

I’ll rise further,

If I see your soul,

You’ll be dead in a blink,

It’s definite,

No suspicion.

~

22 Comments Add yours

  1. Once again, this is very powerful.

  2. Neeraj Kumar says:

    Thank you Dark Landscapes!

  3. dailyadvice101 says:

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  4. Mrs. Peacock says:

    You remind me of a Bhediya, this was fantastic thank you for sharing it with me. 🙂

    1. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Bhediya.. are you referring the comic character?

    2. Mrs. Peacock says:

      No I meant you remind me of a wolf. Did I spell it wrong again? 😀

    3. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Nope.. you did spell correct.. it is just that we have a comic character here called bhedia which is half human half wolf..I thought you know something about it too 🙂 .. How do you know much Hindi.. some Indian connection?

    4. Mrs. Peacock says:

      My best friend lives in Delhi, he taught me some words. 🙂 It sounds like a cool comic, I don’t suppose its also written in english?

    5. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Nope.. I used to read them when I was a kid.. I’m not sure if they are in English as well.. yeah, its cool..in the beginning .. there used to be a single character called bhediya .. which on later stage gets divided in to two characters – Bhedia (Human with super natural powers) and Kobi (the animal with lots of physical power).. they both love the same girl.. If I find any in English .. I’ll send to you for sure..

    6. Mrs. Peacock says:

      Ahh a love triangle it sounds like the twilight series without the sparkly vampires. 😀 That would be great I would like to read it if you do.

    7. Neeraj Kumar says:

      Something like that but much more interesting.. I’ll check if there is english version as well.

    8. Mrs. Peacock says:

      😀 thanks dear that’s very kind of you.

    9. Mrs. Peacock says:

      😀

  5. Brilliant, be everything you need to be when you need to be love it

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you very much!

  6. This holds so many interpretations ! The best phrase for me is definitely the title 🙂
    Amazing work !

    1. Neeraj says:

      Thank you Maryam, Really appreciate your comment.

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